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From: Junio C Hamano <gitster@pobox.com>
To: "Linus Arver via GitGitGadget" <gitgitgadget@gmail.com>
Cc: git@vger.kernel.org, Linus Arver <linusa@google.com>
Subject: Re: [PATCH 03/11] doc: trailer: --no-divider: more precise language
Date: Mon, 08 May 2023 12:32:11 -0700	[thread overview]
Message-ID: <xmqqednqoc04.fsf@gitster.g> (raw)
In-Reply-To: <ad2d669eb0a6ba1f98af064089ef981c50546958.1683566870.git.gitgitgadget@gmail.com> (Linus Arver via GitGitGadget's message of "Mon, 08 May 2023 17:27:42 +0000")

"Linus Arver via GitGitGadget" <gitgitgadget@gmail.com> writes:

> From: Linus Arver <linusa@google.com>
>
> This uses the phrase "commit message part" instead of "commit message".

That much anybody can see from the patch.  The question is, is the
updated phrasing "more precise"?

To me (a non native English speaker), both the original and the
updated text say mostly the same thing, but the added word "part"
actually made my reading hiccup a bit.

It may be because for the word "part" to sit well, it is not clear
enough what "your input" consists of in the updated text.  If it
were somehow clear to readers that "your input" consists of "commit
message part", "some other message part", and "yet another message
part", divided with a three-dash lines, then "commit message part"
might become a good phrasing.  An email can have any garbage in it,
a format-patfch output has commit message and patch text.  So "only
the commit message" or "just the commit message" without "itself"
may be an improvement in clarity, in the same sense that 01/11 made
a sentence say the same sense with a fewer words, but personally I
do not find the posted patch as-is that much of an improvement.

I dunno.

> Signed-off-by: Linus Arver <linusa@google.com>
> ---
>  Documentation/git-interpret-trailers.txt | 2 +-
>  1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-)
>
> diff --git a/Documentation/git-interpret-trailers.txt b/Documentation/git-interpret-trailers.txt
> index 593bc1a1f4e..3e60a6eaabc 100644
> --- a/Documentation/git-interpret-trailers.txt
> +++ b/Documentation/git-interpret-trailers.txt
> @@ -131,7 +131,7 @@ OPTIONS
>  
>  --no-divider::
>  	Do not treat `---` as the end of the commit message. Use this
> -	when you know your input contains just the commit message itself
> +	when you know your input contains only the commit message part
>  	(and not an email or the output of `git format-patch`).
>  
>  CONFIGURATION VARIABLES

  reply	other threads:[~2023-05-08 19:32 UTC|newest]

Thread overview: 73+ messages / expand[flat|nested]  mbox.gz  Atom feed  top
2023-05-08 17:27 [PATCH 00/11] docs: interpret-trailers: reword and add examples Linus Arver via GitGitGadget
2023-05-08 17:27 ` [PATCH 01/11] doc: trailer: fix grammar Linus Arver via GitGitGadget
2023-05-08 19:19   ` Junio C Hamano
2023-05-08 19:33     ` Linus Arver
2023-05-08 21:35       ` Junio C Hamano
2023-05-08 17:27 ` [PATCH 02/11] doc: trailer: swap verb order Linus Arver via GitGitGadget
2023-05-08 19:20   ` Junio C Hamano
2023-05-08 17:27 ` [PATCH 03/11] doc: trailer: --no-divider: more precise language Linus Arver via GitGitGadget
2023-05-08 19:32   ` Junio C Hamano [this message]
2023-05-08 17:27 ` [PATCH 04/11] doc: trailer: explain "commit mesage part" on first usage Linus Arver via GitGitGadget
2023-05-08 19:37   ` Junio C Hamano
2023-05-10  6:44     ` Linus Arver
2023-05-08 17:27 ` [PATCH 05/11] doc: trailer: remove redundant phrasing Linus Arver via GitGitGadget
2023-05-08 17:27 ` [PATCH 06/11] doc: trailer: trailer.<token>.cmd: add missing verb phrase Linus Arver via GitGitGadget
2023-05-08 19:41   ` Junio C Hamano
2023-05-10  6:52     ` Linus Arver
2023-05-10 16:37       ` Junio C Hamano
2023-05-08 17:27 ` [PATCH 07/11] doc: trailer: use angle brackets for <token> and <value> Linus Arver via GitGitGadget
2023-05-08 19:38   ` Junio C Hamano
2023-05-08 17:27 ` [PATCH 08/11] doc: trailer.<token>.command: refer to existing example Linus Arver via GitGitGadget
2023-05-08 19:47   ` Junio C Hamano
2023-05-10  7:08     ` Linus Arver
2023-05-10 16:42       ` Junio C Hamano
2023-05-08 17:27 ` [PATCH 09/11] doc: trailer.<token>.command: emphasize deprecation Linus Arver via GitGitGadget
2023-05-08 19:48   ` Junio C Hamano
2023-05-10  7:10     ` Linus Arver
2023-05-08 17:27 ` [PATCH 10/11] doc: trailer: mention 'key' in DESCRIPTION Linus Arver via GitGitGadget
2023-05-08 17:27 ` [PATCH 11/11] doc: trailer: add more examples " Linus Arver via GitGitGadget
2023-05-08 19:50   ` Junio C Hamano
2023-05-08 17:49 ` [PATCH 00/11] docs: interpret-trailers: reword and add examples Junio C Hamano
2023-05-08 19:07   ` Linus Arver
2023-05-11 21:19 ` [PATCH v2 0/9] " Linus Arver via GitGitGadget
2023-05-11 21:19   ` [PATCH v2 1/9] doc: trailer: fix grammar Linus Arver via GitGitGadget
2023-05-11 21:19   ` [PATCH v2 2/9] doc: trailer: swap verb order Linus Arver via GitGitGadget
2023-05-11 21:19   ` [PATCH v2 3/9] doc: trailer: drop "commit message part" phrasing Linus Arver via GitGitGadget
2023-05-11 21:19   ` [PATCH v2 4/9] doc: trailer: examples: avoid the word "message" by itself Linus Arver via GitGitGadget
2023-05-11 21:19   ` [PATCH v2 5/9] doc: trailer: remove redundant phrasing Linus Arver via GitGitGadget
2023-05-11 21:19   ` [PATCH v2 6/9] doc: trailer: use angle brackets for <token> and <value> Linus Arver via GitGitGadget
2023-05-11 21:19   ` [PATCH v2 7/9] doc: trailer.<token>.command: emphasize deprecation Linus Arver via GitGitGadget
2023-05-11 21:19   ` [PATCH v2 8/9] doc: trailer: mention 'key' in DESCRIPTION Linus Arver via GitGitGadget
2023-05-11 21:19   ` [PATCH v2 9/9] doc: trailer: add more examples " Linus Arver via GitGitGadget
2023-05-12 23:24   ` [PATCH v2 0/9] docs: interpret-trailers: reword and add examples Junio C Hamano
2023-05-16 22:57     ` Linus Arver
2023-05-16 23:18       ` Junio C Hamano
2023-06-06  2:08   ` [PATCH v3 " Linus Arver via GitGitGadget
2023-06-06  2:08     ` [PATCH v3 1/9] doc: trailer: fix grammar Linus Arver via GitGitGadget
2023-06-06  2:08     ` [PATCH v3 2/9] doc: trailer: swap verb order Linus Arver via GitGitGadget
2023-06-06  2:08     ` [PATCH v3 3/9] doc: trailer: drop "commit message part" phrasing Linus Arver via GitGitGadget
2023-06-14 15:00       ` Christian Couder
2023-06-15  2:57         ` Linus Arver
2023-06-06  2:08     ` [PATCH v3 4/9] doc: trailer: examples: avoid the word "message" by itself Linus Arver via GitGitGadget
2023-06-14 15:12       ` Christian Couder
2023-06-15  3:03         ` Linus Arver
2023-06-06  2:08     ` [PATCH v3 5/9] doc: trailer: remove redundant phrasing Linus Arver via GitGitGadget
2023-06-06  2:08     ` [PATCH v3 6/9] doc: trailer: use angle brackets for <token> and <value> Linus Arver via GitGitGadget
2023-06-06  2:08     ` [PATCH v3 7/9] doc: trailer.<token>.command: emphasize deprecation Linus Arver via GitGitGadget
2023-06-06  2:08     ` [PATCH v3 8/9] doc: trailer: mention 'key' in DESCRIPTION Linus Arver via GitGitGadget
2023-06-14 15:27       ` Christian Couder
2023-06-15  3:04         ` Linus Arver
2023-06-06  2:08     ` [PATCH v3 9/9] doc: trailer: add more examples " Linus Arver via GitGitGadget
2023-06-14 15:36     ` [PATCH v3 0/9] docs: interpret-trailers: reword and add examples Christian Couder
2023-06-15  3:06       ` Linus Arver
2023-06-15  7:47         ` Christian Couder
2023-06-15  2:53     ` [PATCH v4 " Linus Arver via GitGitGadget
2023-06-15  2:53       ` [PATCH v4 1/9] doc: trailer: fix grammar Linus Arver via GitGitGadget
2023-06-15  2:53       ` [PATCH v4 2/9] doc: trailer: swap verb order Linus Arver via GitGitGadget
2023-06-15  2:53       ` [PATCH v4 3/9] doc: trailer: drop "commit message part" phrasing Linus Arver via GitGitGadget
2023-06-15  2:53       ` [PATCH v4 4/9] doc: trailer: examples: avoid the word "message" by itself Linus Arver via GitGitGadget
2023-06-15  2:53       ` [PATCH v4 5/9] doc: trailer: remove redundant phrasing Linus Arver via GitGitGadget
2023-06-15  2:53       ` [PATCH v4 6/9] doc: trailer: use angle brackets for <token> and <value> Linus Arver via GitGitGadget
2023-06-15  2:53       ` [PATCH v4 7/9] doc: trailer.<token>.command: emphasize deprecation Linus Arver via GitGitGadget
2023-06-15  2:53       ` [PATCH v4 8/9] doc: trailer: mention 'key' in DESCRIPTION Linus Arver via GitGitGadget
2023-06-15  2:53       ` [PATCH v4 9/9] doc: trailer: add more examples " Linus Arver via GitGitGadget

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