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From: Bagas Sanjaya <bagasdotme@gmail.com>
To: Luis Felipe Hernandez <luis.hernandez093@gmail.com>,
	Shuah Khan <skhan@linuxfoundation.org>,
	corbet@lwn.net
Cc: linux-kernel-mentees@lists.linuxfoundation.org,
	Linux Documentation <linux-doc@vger.kernel.org>,
	Linux Kernel Mailing List <linux-kernel@vger.kernel.org>,
	Mao Zhu <zhumao001@208suo.com>, Ran Sun <sunran001@208suo.com>,
	Xiang wangx <wangxiang@cdjrlc.com>,
	Shaomin Deng <dengshaomin@cdjrlc.com>,
	Charles Han <hanchunchao@inspur.com>,
	Attreyee M <tintinm2017@gmail.com>, LihaSika <lihasika@gmail.com>
Subject: Re: [PATCH] Refactor phrasing for clarity
Date: Mon, 13 May 2024 16:09:46 +0700	[thread overview]
Message-ID: <ZkHY2sYUOXVSWDMO@archie.me> (raw)
In-Reply-To: <20240513022430.17626-1-luis.hernandez093@gmail.com>

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On Mon, May 13, 2024 at 02:24:02AM +0000, Luis Felipe Hernandez wrote:
> * Updated title capitalization for consistency
> * Fixed acronym capitalization (e.g. CPU, vCPU)
> * Added usage of hypenated compoud adjective
> (e.g. host-side polling, where host-side is modifying polling)
> * Added missing verb "as" in "basic logic is as follows"
> * Added missing articl "an" in "guest_halt_poll_ns when an event occurs"
> * Fixed parameter definition in 4, all previous examples started with
>   descibing the parameter in the first sentence followed by additional
> notes
> * Replaced C-terminology Bool in favor of formal form Boolean
> * Cleaned up phrasing in "Further Notes" section for clarity
> 

LGTM, thanks!

Reviewed-by: Bagas Sanjaya <bagasdotme@gmail.com>

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Thread overview: 2+ messages / expand[flat|nested]  mbox.gz  Atom feed  top
2024-05-13  2:24 [PATCH] Refactor phrasing for clarity Luis Felipe Hernandez
2024-05-13  9:09 ` Bagas Sanjaya [this message]

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