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-rw-r--r--Documentation/dtas-archive.txt11
-rw-r--r--Documentation/dtas-player_protocol.txt2
-rw-r--r--Documentation/dtas-player_sink_examples.txt2
-rw-r--r--INSTALL9
-rw-r--r--README6
5 files changed, 14 insertions, 16 deletions
diff --git a/Documentation/dtas-archive.txt b/Documentation/dtas-archive.txt
index f701a5e..c78e1c4 100644
--- a/Documentation/dtas-archive.txt
+++ b/Documentation/dtas-archive.txt
@@ -11,11 +11,12 @@ dtas-archive [OPTIONS] SOURCE DESTINATION
 
 # DESCRIPTION
 
-dtas-archive is intended for archiving audio data to/from laptops and
-computers without ECC memory, attempting to read data multiple times in
-an attempt to detect memory corruption.  dtas-archive may only be
-effective on machines running the Linux kernel where posix_fadvise(2)
-can be used to drop caches for a particular file after fsync(2).
+dtas-archive is intended for archiving audio data to/from laptops,
+marginal USB ports, and computers without ECC memory, attempting
+to read data multiple times in an attempt to detect memory or
+bus corruption.  dtas-archive may only be effective on machines
+running the Linux kernel where posix_fadvise(2) can be used to
+drop caches for a particular file after fsync(2).
 
 dtas-archive spawns sox(1) to archive audio data (likely uncompressed
 WAVE) to FLAC and verifies the result using sndfile-cmp(1), a tool
diff --git a/Documentation/dtas-player_protocol.txt b/Documentation/dtas-player_protocol.txt
index 18dc2ab..54b87ca 100644
--- a/Documentation/dtas-player_protocol.txt
+++ b/Documentation/dtas-player_protocol.txt
@@ -20,7 +20,7 @@ This must stay over Unix sockets because filesystem permissions are
 needed to enforce code execution permissions.  dtas-player is really a
 shell in disguise, after all.
 
-Protocol feedback greatly appreciated email us at dtas-all@nongnu.org
+Protocol feedback greatly appreciated, email us at dtas-all@nongnu.org
 
 *********************************************************
 
diff --git a/Documentation/dtas-player_sink_examples.txt b/Documentation/dtas-player_sink_examples.txt
index e9d28a9..d7ea73e 100644
--- a/Documentation/dtas-player_sink_examples.txt
+++ b/Documentation/dtas-player_sink_examples.txt
@@ -11,8 +11,6 @@ dtas-sinkedit SINKNAME
 
 # EXAMPLES
 
-
-
 ## Streaming Ogg-Vorbis to Icecast
 
 To use oggfwd(1) and Icecast, the following sink works.
diff --git a/INSTALL b/INSTALL
index 6fce79f..04c2bf9 100644
--- a/INSTALL
+++ b/INSTALL
@@ -1,19 +1,18 @@
 Uncommon for audio software, dtas is implemented in Ruby.
 
 The latest stable release or development snapshot of Ruby is recommended.
-However, Ruby 1.9.3 should work, too.  Older versions of Ruby are not
-recommended.
+However, Ruby 1.9.3 and later works, but older versions of Ruby do not.
 
-SoX is a dependency of dtas-player.  While not _strictly_ required, the
+SoX is a dependency of dtas-player.  While not _strictly_ required,
 dtas-player uses SoX by default and you will need it unless you've
 reconfigured dtas-player to use something else.
 
-mp3gain is required if you use ReplayGain with MP3s
+mp3gain is required if you want to use ReplayGain with MP3s
 
 If you only intend to use dtas-cueedit, you will need metaflac(1) from
 the FLAC package.
 
-Debian 7 users can install dependencies easily:
+Debian 7+ users can install dependencies easily:
 
     sudo apt-get install sox libsox-fmt-all mp3gain flac ruby-dev
 
diff --git a/README b/README
index f4119e9..5cf155e 100644
--- a/README
+++ b/README
@@ -75,7 +75,7 @@ pull-requests) via plain-text mail to the mailing list is very much
 appreciated.
 
 Please send plain-text mail to the list at <dtas-all@nongnu.org>\
-HTML will not be read.  dtas is for GUI-phobes, by GUI-phobes.\
+HTML mail will not be read.  dtas is for GUI-phobes, by GUI-phobes.\
 Mailing list archives available at <ftp://lists.gnu.org/dtas-all>
 or <http://80x24.org/dtas-all/>
 No subscription is necessary to post to the mailing list.
@@ -105,6 +105,6 @@ You should have received a copy of the GNU General Public License along
 with this program; if not, see https://www.gnu.org/licenses/gpl-3.0.txt
 
 Note: The GPL does not and can not apply to external commands run by
-dtas scripts, so users _may_ run any non-Free Software you want via dtas
+dtas scripts, so users _may_ run any non-Free Software they want via dtas
 (just like one may do so via bash).  However, the dtas project does not
-endorse nor support the use of any non-Free Software.
+endorse or support the use of any non-Free Software.