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authorEric Wong <e@80x24.org>2015-12-25 08:32:25 +0000
committerEric Wong <e@80x24.org>2015-12-25 08:33:43 +0000
commitfe5aad0bdfe8e12d4cf92f9555273276fddf1aae (patch)
treea3069b90a69aa4b16b53d1402c8ee64401e316cd /Documentation
parentbc374a76530826e7f701c6643a59423a2c912be1 (diff)
English grammar is not easy :x
While we're at it, dtas-archive.txt is expanded to document things
like: http://80x24.org/dtas-all/20150918085401.GA8610@dcvr.yhbt.net/
(bus failure).
Diffstat (limited to 'Documentation')
3 files changed, 7 insertions, 8 deletions
diff --git a/Documentation/dtas-archive.txt b/Documentation/dtas-archive.txt
index f701a5e..c78e1c4 100644
--- a/Documentation/dtas-archive.txt
+++ b/Documentation/dtas-archive.txt
@@ -11,11 +11,12 @@ dtas-archive [OPTIONS] SOURCE DESTINATION
-dtas-archive is intended for archiving audio data to/from laptops and
-computers without ECC memory, attempting to read data multiple times in
-an attempt to detect memory corruption.  dtas-archive may only be
-effective on machines running the Linux kernel where posix_fadvise(2)
-can be used to drop caches for a particular file after fsync(2).
+dtas-archive is intended for archiving audio data to/from laptops,
+marginal USB ports, and computers without ECC memory, attempting
+to read data multiple times in an attempt to detect memory or
+bus corruption.  dtas-archive may only be effective on machines
+running the Linux kernel where posix_fadvise(2) can be used to
+drop caches for a particular file after fsync(2).
 dtas-archive spawns sox(1) to archive audio data (likely uncompressed
 WAVE) to FLAC and verifies the result using sndfile-cmp(1), a tool
diff --git a/Documentation/dtas-player_protocol.txt b/Documentation/dtas-player_protocol.txt
index 18dc2ab..54b87ca 100644
--- a/Documentation/dtas-player_protocol.txt
+++ b/Documentation/dtas-player_protocol.txt
@@ -20,7 +20,7 @@ This must stay over Unix sockets because filesystem permissions are
 needed to enforce code execution permissions.  dtas-player is really a
 shell in disguise, after all.
-Protocol feedback greatly appreciated email us at dtas-all@nongnu.org
+Protocol feedback greatly appreciated, email us at dtas-all@nongnu.org
diff --git a/Documentation/dtas-player_sink_examples.txt b/Documentation/dtas-player_sink_examples.txt
index e9d28a9..d7ea73e 100644
--- a/Documentation/dtas-player_sink_examples.txt
+++ b/Documentation/dtas-player_sink_examples.txt
@@ -11,8 +11,6 @@ dtas-sinkedit SINKNAME
 ## Streaming Ogg-Vorbis to Icecast
 To use oggfwd(1) and Icecast, the following sink works.